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The biggest change I made on this page, aside from the toning work, was to add the extra thoughts about not letting Caitlyn escape. In the original, I thought he might just be having an internal dilemma with himself, but as I discovered in later chapters, no, there really are the voices of the prior vampires of the line in their head. I thought I'd emphasize that more here.

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